After our second deadline arrived we got feedback from out teacher, this was both good and bad, it was good because it says what we did well and bad for the parts that we need to improve, if we do improve parts that were poor we hop that we can increase the grade we will get.
The parts that we need to improve are:
The first dissolve doesnt work well, we will improve this by either using other shots or by experimenting with it.
The zoom on the stairs at the train station doesnt work and will be fixed by either re-shooting at the same station or somewhere easier to access.
The handheld shot is too long to work well, we will improve this by shortening it to the parts that are necesary
The 360 isnt great, we hope to improve this with a change of tactics, the problem we have it the space around the table in which we need to film this means 2 people need to take it in turn to turn the camera.
We need to add more flashbacks to emphasise the financial position that the main character is in, we will do that by filming a range of flashbacks that we can cut to in the video, some ideas that we were given were to have a final notice through the post.
If we make the changes we feel that we can possibly be getting a B grade for our production. However to do this we will need to put in the work.
